Awesome... so now... on to the big show?

First of all, I did review chapter 2, but somehow it was anonymous. I'm the one who corrected your spelling!

This is an excellent chapter, although I do have one question. Why didn't Wes photograph the urn with a digital camera? That would seem the logical thing to do.

It was nice to see Lindsey, and you wrote him the way he was in the fifth season (although what happened to his education? A lawyer wouldn't say "me and him."). That's not the way Joss should have depicted him. He couldn't lose all the education & polish he had picked up so quickly.

I especially liked the scene with Lilah at the end. I do think Wes really cared for her, and I think she loved him as much as she was able. I hope he can help her. And I hope Lindsey is saved as well.

First of all, two spelling corrections. It's LindsEy (Lindsay is a girl's name, although some girls, like Catherine Willows' daughter, are LindsEys). And it's Gyllenhaal.

I liked Cordelia in the Garden of Eden, but didn't a famous snake once visit there? I don't know if Wes should trust her or not. He did love her at one time, too.

Please, please, please don't kill Lindsey. Let him be warned by the three children or by a vision of Darla (she does know that he loved her) or something. He deserves to live on & continue to fight for redemption.

I've always enjoyed (I can't really say liked) Lilah as a character, and Wes was one of my favorites. I can just picture this whole scene. It's very well written and fascinating.

Awesome. More soon!

Wow.. awesome!

Wickedly brilliant, hope you update soon!

I hope you kep this going, its plausible and a VERY well-written Lilah!

to tell the truth kind of boring but a good story line, and a little slow. keep it going though its not that bad. but instead of lilah telling him i would have had fred do it. it is possible like in season 4 with darla(and if you dont remember the episode, its when jasmine first appeared), looks like her and has the memories plus it would convince wesley more.

Ooh, sounds like an interesting twist. I'd love to see more of this.

This story is great, cant wait to read more !
Keep up the good work.

Interesting so far. Keep up the good work, I'm interesting in seeing where you're going to take this.