i wonder, if i keep glowingly reviewing your backlist work, will it prompt you to write something now? because you are exceptionally talented. i came looking for fan fiction to fill in some of the gaps the show has, specifically the BA gaps, and everything i have read of yours does that so beautifully and effectively. i would love to see your take on eames' comments in "smile" and what's happening in the current season, please write more!

AMAZING.

I'm pretty late on reviewing, but I wanted to let you know: this story is amazing. I love every part of it, from the main idea of it to the way you expressed Bobby and Alex's feelings. Great job

I really enjoyed this story - I love how you compared Alex to a mother bear protecting her cub (perfect!) and then how afterwards you described Bobby as equal, not her ward or protector (also perfect!) and the metaphor about their old world ending and a new one beginning, and how they really didn't even have to talk to figure that out. Nice job!

Wow! This was so brilliant. You have such a grasp on these characters (something which is seriously lacking in CI fandom, sadly). Everything is so fluid and the subtle beauty of the B/A relationship is so inherent in your words that it can only be felt, rather than expounded upon in praise. Don't ever stop writing!

Awesome! I love the intensity of emotion in this. Glad you're still writing LO:CI fic!

Aw... that was so sweet. And clever:o) Love how it ties in with the song, too.

It was great how Bobby's fears became Alex's and his constant worry that he's not worth it was exactly what she was thinking too. Hehe, also like that little bit about the red light. Classic.

I think that my relief that you kept Alex in the land of the living balances whatever irritation I got from being so led the other way:o) You write wonderfully.

Until next time...
~Daze

Easier on the nerves, peh! Mine were tingling ever since I knew there was another person in that apartment! Beautiful build up to the climax of the "Bobby Save". Superman, eat your heart out.

I absolutly adored the ending, with Alex and Bobby confronting eachother about their world ending. I'm so glad you had Bobby let his emotions control his actions for once, and allowed him to have the nerve to embrace her. So touching and deep. Brilliant.

Another wonderful job. Tell your muse to let you in on more plots like this...more often! Cheers!

Nicely done. I liked this a lot.

Yea! Good ending! I liked this fic so much!

I don't need to tell you that I'm blown away.. wow. Totally amazing story.

I think we were suspicious 'cause you did kill Bobby. Woof, that was a bit too much of an emotional roller coaster for me...write something fluffy and happy next time,K? for me? ooh, and write more SVU fic...eh, have to go now...

Cheers!

Excellent just Excellent!!

That was fantastic! Great emotionally-discriptive writing. Loved it!

Are you kidding? NOTHING about this story is even CLOSE to being OOC, and THANK YOU for not killing Alex. LOL This was an amazing story. :) Great work.