Very Strange needs more plot (I see why you like Napoleon Dynamite) stop typing in all caps and better grammar.

um... this is an odd ending...uh... it was good anyway...

Not a good story, but it made me laugh so good job I guess.

Yo, Dumb Spidy,

um... I put my story up!

Read and Review.

Hey, the raining stopped. Hooray! Anyways, you should make longer chapters. And, I don't know. For some weird reason, it felt kind of dull. But it was still funny. So here it is. Longer Chapters. More Show of Stupidness Of Dumb Spidy. That is it. Update soon. Max. Oh, i was wondering, after you register, do you immedietly go on, or do u wait a day?

OK. You said you wanted reviews, so I'm really hoping that you're up to a bit of constructive criticism, cause that's what you're getting. Also, since you're new, I'd like to go ahead and state that absolutely none of what I say here is meant as an insult, and I really really *do* mean it as *constructive* criticism.

Question: why is everything you've written in all capitals? Even your profile is in all capitals, for goodness' sake! Are you not aware that writing in all capital letters (1) makes it look like you're shouting, and is therefore rude, (2) is totally unnecessary, and therefore actually distracts from whatever is written (I mean, come on, this isn't an ad for used cars) (3) is not funny, (4) makes you seem incredibly juvinile (I realise that you made up Dumb Spidy in the 3rd grade and that's fine, but you're not in the 3rd grade any more and writing in all caps is a very elementary school thing to do), and (5) is technically bad grammar?

Also, how did climbing out a hole in the bottom of a dumpster behind a mall lead him directly to the freeway? It makes no sense at all and I assume is probably not what you originally meant, and therefore I suggest that you put some sort of transition in there, even if it's just a line break of some kind.

Good luck with the next chapter (but please don't write it in all capitals).

Hey Bill,that was pretty funny. Ha-ha. I should write a story about Dumb Spidy, too. The Victoria Secret Part was funny.

See ya,
Max