ah rly sweet, i liked it! kawaii x mary

cute i thought you did very well keep writing xxlaxx

Whoo, kudos to you! You have a fairly good understanding of Squall and his views on their relationship. It's true that he is a killer, but strangely enough that was never an obstacle between them. I thought it was very accurate though, his insecurities included. Plus, the fluff was a lovely touch. ^_^ Sweet! Keep up the good work. You should write more Squinoa.

I like it...though I don't think anyone thinks of Squall as a cold-blooded killer. When he was made the leader of SeeD, all the other students seemed to accept it well. I can't wait to beat this game(I'm at the end of disc three now)! SQUALL AND RINOA!

OMG! This story is so awesome!! how are you able to write like that? *jealous* lolz...

aw! kawaii desu! Too cute, i LOVED IT! Excellent character analysis of squall. *sigh*...Squall...^_^ Fab work, well done!

Ugh...I'm late, I'm always late. Much apologies. I've been crazily busy and my cable modem seems to go on strike at random. Ahem...anyway...as I said before...

Beautifully, beautifully done. You were able to capture Squall so well through his thoughts and emotions. I loved how you expressed his doubt that he could be loved by her after all he had done, and how ultimately her love had changed him. I thought that was always a key message in the game and you delivered it home here. Heck you even made something simple like sharing a cup of warm milk an intimate sacred moment between the two of them. Sigh...reading it here again gets me all misty eyed. I hope you write some more SquallxRinoa fanfics, because you do them so well...much as I adore your CloudxTifa stories which I always want to see more of! Keep up the fantastic work! Kudos! And it was an honor to be a beta reader for such a wonderfully sweet story.

You know...

I am almost REALLY offended that i wasn't given first dibs in doing any editing of this.

REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY OFFENDED.

However you are quite easily one of my favorite authors and my temper is always fleeting

So ill just congratulate you for a very warm and touching story. It seems like you have decided to tackle yet another FF pairing and you are doing an incredible job at it.

One note, i have a hard time imagining stone cold Squall drinking warm milk :-P

I like how you brought about his whole emotional turmoil and how he tries not to let such things affect him.

Interesting how someone who pretends to not care about emotions and what other people thinks feels the need to act the role of the tough killer just to keep up his image.

Anyways, i realize you are on your break so i shall say bye bye.

BTW, Man's inhumanity will be updated soon, i promise...kinda.

Oh hehehe, a cup of warm milk... XD That sounded so cute. This was great; I like how you explored Squall's darker side. It's just like him to want to do anything for Rinoa. For your first fic, awesome work!! =D

it's so damn sweet it makes me wanna cry. But I won't because this is a great story! An insight into Squall's softer hidden side and his relationship with Rinoa. Keep up the good work.

Ja Ne! :D :)

Moonlight Star Phoenix

CUTE! You've definitely got talent for fluff.

I'm so glad you came into the FF8 side, too! We here could use some fluff=)

Your writing is incredible, as usual. I liked how to mentioned on several occassions that Squall is a killer, but Rinoa loves him anyway. So human, and so in-character.

I saw your Cloud/Tifa videos on YouTube! They're SO CUTE! I LOVED THEM ALL. I'm not a member, though, so I couldn't comment or rate them. Just telling you that I adored them=)

How cool that Wayward Tempest looked over this for you!

~Bianka-chan

Aw, that was really sweet. You captured Squall just the way I would imagine him with Rinoa instead of portraying him as loud and obnoxious like some other stories I've read. ^__^ Good job, keep writing! ^__^