 coldfiredragon 2006-06-28 . chapter 10Oh the torture, a week at Bat belfry. Who is going to go crazy first? Roy or Batman? I liked it. I'm glad they got him home and that they got Dixon before he could make a move. Catch you later. |
 Yourperfectdisaster 2006-06-28 . chapter 10Yess.. i learned a bit about the top secret information... And Nightwing was there, I loved that beyond explanation.. But it's over.. that makes me a bit sad.. |
 Yourperfectdisaster 2006-06-28 . chapter 8And it seemed like Roy was finally going to be saved and get better! I wonder what this top secreet information is.. Maybe I'll find out if i keep reading.. |
 coldfiredragon 2006-06-27 . chapter 6Dang, even with a renewed heroine addiction he's resourceful. Have to love the kid for trying. Now the question is who is going to find him first? Ollie and Bats on their recon, or the compound guards? Looking forward to chapter 7. |
 Yourperfectdisaster 2006-06-27 . chapter 5Woah, Batman is so smart.. I would have never thought of that whole tie Austin up loosely and trace all calls from the location thing... Oh no, poor Roy!! |
 Yourperfectdisaster 2006-06-27 . chapter 4oy! I still don't know what the super top secret information is.. I hope Batman and Green Arrow rescue Roy before it gets worse.. and the information (o0o0 top secret) is revealed to those horrid men.. |
 Yourperfectdisaster 2006-06-26 . chapter 2oh no! I hope Ollie and Bruce (who is in Batman mode Lol) find Roy before any major destruction is caused.. Poor Roy, being abused like that for some information.. Very curious.. |
 Yourperfectdisaster 2006-06-26 . chapter 1Looks interesting.. Very interesting.. I wonder what Roy knows and if he'll tell.. the paragraphs got a little bit drunk at the end and sort of repeated themselves, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing ;) Write more soon |
 coldfiredragon 2006-06-26 . chapter 1Interesting beginning. One thing though, near the end you have about 3-4 paragraphs that are duplicates of the paragraphs above them. May want to look at the chapter again. |