"I wish you could remind me who I was, because every day I'm a little further off." -Amanda Palmer (Astronaut)

This chapter, especially his musings at the end, really made me think of that line from the song Astronaut. It just seemed to really fit him, no?

I now ship Kyro. Or Kohn. Or Pyrocat. Anyway, this was lovely. :)

Oh God. I cried so much after I finished reading it. I can't believe how this story felt so ..real.

I enjoyed reading it so much. I can't even describe my opinion and thoughts about this story!

Wow! Nice.

Awesome love it :):):) would be awesome if you wrote a sequal

O MY GOSH! Amazing story! One of the best i've ever read!

Adding to favorites right now!

This story is so amazing so fa.r :P I'm only on Chapter 19, but I really, really love it so fa.r :)

I don't think I could possibly write a review that would do this baby justice. Let's just say you're the one that taught me all about Kitty and Pyro and their names and their pasts and the beauty of what makes the Kyro coupling. I fell in love with this story, every quote at the top, every chapter, every beautiful interaction. I still go back and read parts of it or the whole thing from time to time. It brings me to tears sometimes.

Some of my favorite scenes are where John kicks Kitty out then cries and the last scene. I really couldn't help but fall in love with the couple after this fic and it's up there in my top ten all time/all fandoms/all pairings favorites on the site. I'm so glad you're back here again and are going to finish Make This Last.

Do you mind if I do an author feature on you for our Save the Kyro forum? You've written some of the best Kyros there are.

oh my gosh. this story was amazing. i just finished reading it, and i can't wait to read the sequel! i love the way you portray your characters. they all seem real and not ooc. i liked how you used "the allegory of a cave". i thought that was really interesting. you should continue writing!

Have I ever told you that I want to marry this story?

So this'll be about my sixth time reading this AWESOME story. '

i think you broke a record. the number of times i cried trading this story was ridiculous. i hate that you killed off pete, but i kno it was necessary. killing rogue was cruel, altho it's what changed bobby in the end. and the professor thing is something that i think a lot of people realize. i honestly think that jean, the professor, and scott aren't really dead, and a lot of people also picked up on the non-permanent cure thing. i don't think the series is finished. after all, it never was identified as a trilogy. but this was really good. a lot of the things in this story made me sad, or angry, but it was so well-done that it really does make sense, and i love it for that. such a sweet, heart-wrenching story.

“The wings just make me look pretty.”

“Guess we’ll have to kick some metal ass then.”

Fuckin' ACE, man, fuckin' ACE. I love this, and am so looking forward to the rest.

And I am totally squirming now, at the end of the chapter...

*grabs popcorn*

'Was she coming on to him? Now that would certainly make things…'

Fuckin' John...This is awesome, and I'm in a hurry to read the rest of it, I love how you've described this.

Robots? Heh...That's new...Well, onto the next chappie!

I know this is a little late, considering you posted this ages ago, but I just wanted to confirm that the Russian bit was correct. You pronounce it "Ya loobloo vac," if you were wondering. The only note I'd make is the B in Bac could just be a lower case b.