I don't care if you think this was sappy, it was awesome! :D

Yay! Oh my god, I'm so happy. haha You keep making me up and down. :D

Waa. *sniff* waa.

Oh thank goodness. :D

What what what what, Ed and Al are dead? I almost don't want to keep reading.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwh

you should know that sappy endings are the best! it wasn't as epic as ripples or daughter of the land but it touched my heart. right now there's kind of a lump in my throat and, just...ed and winry are just so precious!:)

thats so prettyyyyy! :')

Hi.

Not to worry. The ending wasn't nearly as sappy as half the bullshit on FFNET. In fact, I think it fit the story nicely. You write wonderfully, and I'm definitely Faving you as an author.
Keep writing,

I adore your stories. I've read this one a couple of times, now, and I never get tired of it!

You have a wonderful talent for writing :)

Vee

Yeah, okay, the ending was sappy, but I really liked the story anyway.

Your worldbuilding was not so intense as to be "loads of boring backstory", but just enough to make it feel real.

I loved the way it was all told through an outside perspective. The use of a journalist was brilliant.

Excellent work, really. I quite enjoyed it. ]

I absolutely ADORED this story! The writing was very good, and the plot fell together so well! I loved the mystery, and when I started to suspect that the Elrics, and then Winry and Paninya weren't dead I totally flipped! You made what I thought was going to be a great story and made it amazing with that happy ending. Wonderful job! :)

dis story is like...epic!

totally awesome!

.it.

Period.

This was such a good story. You did such a wonderful job creating the reasoning for what happened. I didn't have any problem not believing the tale you created. Bravo!

Loved it, loved it, LOVED. IT!

Dude, you are now one of my favorite authors. *round of applause at your awesomness*