 otaku freak to the 3rd power 9/30/08 . chapter 1cute |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 11/14/06 . chapter 1Nice! |
 Shio is Love 11/6/06 . chapter 1KAWAII
I love the interactions between them. And I loved Oshitari and Gakuto too!
Was that Oshitari's Valentine Kiss lyrics? LOL Very fitting. |
 kite 6/30/06 . chapter 1 greatfic XD and i totally agree sanada looks stupid with his hat on |
 g 6/28/06 . chapter 1 heya, that was some wat good... haha
missus? what is that? and isnt "buchou" wat donna calls teresa? hehe
“Are you okay?” Choutarou’s concerned face searched Shishido’s brown eyes. His arms were still wrapped around Shishido’s neck.
“Your arms—” Shishido managed to get out.
“Oh!” Choutarou immediately took his arms from Shishido’s neck. ( are they both guys? my guess is yes that is very...intersting? lolz)
“C-can I put my arm around you?” He added quickly, “it might help you warm up.” ( was that some sortta excuse hahaha)
and Oshitari's last line about where that was betta than any movie was very very good! hohoho
where do u come up with all this stuff...actually i dont think i wanna know...; |
 midnight's-fantasies 6/27/06 . chapter 1haha cute and wat does WAFF mean? hm thought you were REALLY against shounenai guess u love it too XD |
 Flyinganimepig 6/27/06 . chapter 1so cute!11 WUAUWUAWUAWU for some reason i like the word husky HAHAHA it reminds me of rice husks but anyway WHAT A CUTE ONE SHOT YOU JUST SHOT ME WIT LUV IN THE HEART
...HAHA! |
 Ammeh 6/26/06 . chapter 1Cute! It's obvious you did your research on Hyoutei, and that makes me happy! But, did you forget that in Japan Valentine's Day is only for girls to give chocolates to boys? I sort of understand because it's Ootori's birthday, but it still seems odd, especially since it was chocolate and Ootori gave chocolate the other way at the end. O.o I also thought it was a little strange that Shishido's older brother called Ootori "Choutarou(-kun)" instead of "Ootori-kun." Otherwise, though, nice! |