that was really awesome! its short, but i guess that's why its so perfect and i hardly found anything wrong! one thing...you could atleast make soujiro BE there...mention her glancing at him or something. it would make their relationship (freindship, now) clearer! GREAT, really amazingly awesomely beautiful, though...thankyou!

it'll be nice if you continue.^^

Sweet and innocent love
WAAH, im goona BURST!*BOWN~!*

Very lovable, but Sou still didn't know about it?*smirk*
Such lovely couple, I really like this couple even at the first time.

Slightly hard to follow, but good job. I'm not crazy about the Sou/Misao pairing, but I like your idea. (and the fact that you had Kaoru and Kenshin married boosted my interest). Good job! Keep writing!

Very great one=shot
you made me smile...sometimes.