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Reviews for: An Ever Rolling Stream
Danny Barefoot
2006-07-15 . chapter 1
'Frowsty'; that's a new one. It's nice to have a story like this with few events and lots of space to lead up to them. You can have nice stuff like the fourth paragraph down. War description not the least original slant on the standing evil at all.
rhymneyfaries
2006-06-26 . chapter 1
Oh, that was really good Peter.
*smiles*
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