aye aye aye...do u hav ne idea how much hcl burns? u outta try it. i got a suggestion...hcl on da ship seems farfetched, but u cud hav hydrogen peroxide. smarts equally bad, used to disinfect wounds, used it quite often on da farm animals and on ourselves...nishit is way to fond of it thoh. da idiot applies it for fun...

haha, once again keeping the humor up, eh?

this was a perfect example of how well real-life experiences can translate into fan-fics that are easy to relate to :)

cute Miki, me likes. just remember to break up different characters' dialogue into seperate paragraphs. it makes it easier to read and is just grammatically correct -

see ya Mik

xoxo

I, literally, laughed out loud. Poor Spike!

Funny, Spike needs a new finger. Hydrocloric acid is corosive,

right.I will read more stories.

I really liked really keep Spike and the others in character. I just can't wait until your next Bebop story

This is a really good story you've got started. You should really write more. _

That was great. I love it. VERY well done. Now I have to look at your other stories.

Good luck!

Kairos Goddess of Misery

I like it! Please make some more!

Sincerely,

AshK