Good story.

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Amazing beginning. I can't wait to read more.

aw :] this is sad and yet cute at the same time!

This is really good, but I'm totally confused. What's going on? Is that really all there is? BAH!

AW...are you going to just leave it as a oneshot? or are you going to continue it? i wanna hear what happens next!

really well written. love it!

Ek Where is the rest !

One chapter a year, eh? I like it.

How are you going to fix the lovers? ... Tight pants might work ...

I really like this. Too bad you never wrote more, cus this first chapter is _very_ promising. I knew already, from reading Butterschotch and Chocolate, that your writing flows well and is really good, but this was amazing. Really. :)

Haha, that reminds me of my insane English teacher, and my friend Sammie, who's boyfriend is totally Emo... Haha.

Anyway, my English teacher caught her skipping class to make out with him, and wrote on the refferal: Skipping class to be with her boyfriend. (Black hair, wairs girl pants.)

HAHAHAHA! We all laughed about that for weeks, because, it's true. He wears girl pants, lol.

:)

Good times, good times, lol.

I don't get iot.. :S whats going on? where is eddikins going?

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Amazing. Keep writing, I want to know what happens! :]

Interesting start. I'd like to know where you're going with this. Please update soon!

AHH. Don't stop! You have to update soon!

I'm definitely curious about whats going to happen.

And I love the fact that Edward and Bella are drifting apart (although they're the best couple ever)... but I'm hoping it won't always be that way. Something's gotta bring em back together, right?

I think the tight pants would do it...

i love it. I can't wait to see what happens!

kp

Edward and tight pants in the same sentance...*passes out* makes me feel like a giddy school girl ..lol.