is that it?

AW...this is really good

lol it's a deal. I'll keep writing if you do. Yay cuteness. It's good to know that Collins could turn the day that Angel died into something more happy, but still remember her all the same. I love how Joanne called them...it seemed like she was calling her two sons haha. Very nice and looking forward to reading more!

Awe, baby. Can't wait to see how this goes.

I was so so close to crying in this story. And believe me I never cry so good job. I really like how you depicted the day, and how it was the one day Collins could let out his emotions. So Collins being big and brave for everyone else. The comment about finding a new man, just killed me. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this! good job hun.

Ohh! I like it! Its like RENT meets The Twilight Zone only fluffier and not quite so spooky! Give us another chapter pweez.

It's really good so far! Can't wait for the next chapeter! :D