I thought weary to the bone was very good! you stuffed alot of action into a short story...most the short stories dont have that much excitement and the stories that are that exciting drag on way too long!

Wkd fic but can i just ask...

Y DOES AXEL NEVER DIE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

i know it sounds harsh but its true

Wow. Nice story. My opinion is the loner the fic the better and your's was realy good.

Hey, this is really good! It's good to see that there's more action and less romance for once (even though I'm one of the people who do that) but yeah! It was interesting and believable. Can't wait to see the next chapter!

I liked it. Will there be others like this?

hey,
i like the storie
i hope you update soon
love it

love
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it was awsome!!

“Hey!” Shark said bending down to retrieve something shiny from the floor. As he did so a mechanical limb, tipped with a sharp pincer, shot out and snapped in the air just where Shark’s head had been. “I found your key.” He finished standing back up and walking over to them. Hawk and King dashed passed him to where Spydah was hiding in the shadows.

He did it again! Sorry, this is a thing that gets me about Shark. I think it's awesome but it also bugs the hell out of me.

Fantastic, yet again. You've captured the characters really well, the action sequence was pretty cool, and I love the end! Awesomely awesome, dude. =D Congrats.

Maybe we'll see more...? (By the way, I shall be asking this in every review for your fics... =D)