Brilliant! I loved the childish banter between them. One of the few great KxY fanfics. ( I love that pariing )

"Wherever seraphim go when they die, it can’t be as wondrous as the mortal world."

Beautiful line. And... just thought you should know about now, I am in love with this story. I'd shower you with compliments, but I'd rather read the rest of it first. ^^

*laughs* I am SO going to do that to my kids someday. "Here comes the rheiard! Here it comes!" xDD Brilliant.

Woah, I don't check on this story for a few months and you go ahead and write like 15 chapters. O_o And completed it, woot! (so much shame on me...) VERY lovely! I especially want to praise Spiritua, you really have such a pleasant and artistic way with words (much like Kratos, hm?) and I enjoyed reading Kratos's POVs the most! They are so Kratos. The rest of the story is all quite good too. Such a pretty way to throw words around, I wonder how you two do it. This author has much to learn.

In any case, good show, Meowzy, Spiritua. A -fabulous- read. XD Can't wait to see the sequel! How will Yuan get out of being in the Renegades thing in one week? Sounds impossible? O_O (though I should know better by now...)

I especially look forward to seeing more of your writing, Spiritua Masquerade!! =^_^=

Whoa. I finally finished it! YAY!

I gotta start with: LOL. There are countless parts that made me laugh hysterically. Pointy sticks now officially rock. The main one that comes to my mind is chapter seven with the "accident in the dark" and Kratos trying to play it off as if nothing happened. And the breaking of the Fourth Wall in chapter sixteen was pretty intuitive.

Now, this is only my opinion: take it or leave it. While Kratos and Yuan's relationship was expanded throughout the entire story, I get the feeling that it was kinda rushed into in chapters 22-ish and more with the sudden love confessions. Some scenes hinted at it through phsyical compromising positions, but when it came to a verbal confession, just seemed precipitous.

Poor Muris! He deserves a snuggle! -makes Muris plushie- You'd think in four thousand years of plotting revenge, he'd find time to get a tan or something to wear other than a trenchcoat. And it'll take a while to get the image of dragons out of my head...

The epilogue was one of my favorite chapters. Imagining Kratos sitting in that room all lonely and whatnot, waiting for his snuggle hunny Yuan to come and the Renegades having suspicions about him. Gah! Can't those evil bastards see they're in love?! *smacks Renegades*

Overall, I loved it. 'Twas a pleasure to read. Both of you have unique writing styles; the seperate POVs alone were enough to conjure some giggles as each had its own humorous muses.

That's... evil... XD *dies laughing*

Aw, I thought there'd be bloody, bloody action... Oh well, at least there's drama!

Yay! Action! A duel for heavens sakes, a duel! W00t!

HOLY %$@^&%$^?!!? A friggin missle? Haven't these guys seen Survivor or Flight 29 Down?

Very well done. I can feel the hatred now.

WA *SOB* T_T wass so cutee! i really like this fic it wass nice

So beautiful! Looking forward to sequel!

aww! Very cute! :)

My eyes were glued to the computer screen. Wonderful!!~
I love this fic so much, I'm extremely glad I was able to stay with it until the end!!~ (Kinda, sorta...)

Beautiful! Masterful! Timeless - ful...!~
Loved it, great ending.

I don't know what else to say, the original character was fantastic, great plot and storyline. It was sad to see how things were at the end, with Kratos's treatment and all, but knowing things will get better lets in a light a hope for the reader.

Can't wait for the sequel!~ (And will try to review all the time for that one!~)

~ Serenity Aur

Aww...I'm so sad to see this end!

Wait...did someone say...sequel? SEQUEL!