jesse rules man

You wrote Christine instead of Ella at the end of it...Also in one of the chapters you mentioned Thanksgiving, that's an American holiday, brits don't celebrate it.

Okay so far, I enjoyed it except for that bet bit, it really is overdone.You write well, and you manage to keep the story interesting so hats off to you.

Favorite character, well you haven't really developed James, Sirius etc. to the same extent as Sylvia, Derek etc. but then I guess that's understandable as the're OC's and the ones from the book are already developed. I guess so far the character I enjoy reading about most is Sylvia.

Favorite pairing, would have to be L/J, and well I think Sirius needs to get with someone...

I love it! Keep going!

thanks for updating. i really enjoyed what you wrote. the only criticism that I had was in chapter 14, you used negotiation when i think that you meant interrogation. otherwise i realy enjoyed this update. actually i enjoyed this update inspite of that.

I haven't really read a fanfiction in over a year.
It was nice to come back to a good story.
Hope to read more.

No! Lily! No! All of James's hard work!
Heh... I'll stop talking to the charries and review now
A bootiful chapter- the only thing I wont change is the insert of /some/ kind of page break between the sylvia/jesse secton and the lily/james section. I was really confundled there for a second.

Muchos Luff though

.:froggie:.

wicked
update
CrazyLily

Argleyorg! Itwas so PERFECT until Jesse messed it up! My favourite couple /was/ Sylvia/Jesse, but I guess i'll have to go back to the ol' Lily/James... especially becuase of the unbelievable sweet scene earlier in this chappie

Faboolous story! I like the freshness of your charries.

Muchos Luff

.:froggie:.

I love this! :-) Yay! :-) Keep going!

My fave chars are James and Lily and I would like to see more of them in the story but I also like the Sylvia and Jesse. My least fave is Ella. Good story and update soon! :D

thanks for updating first of all. so my favorite character is sylvia, i don't know why, i just like her. um, lets see, i don't really have a least favorite character right now, but i probably will later. i don't understand the fourth question, lol, and my favorite couple righ now is James/Lily. i only have one suggestion, could you find someway to show that a different scene is starting? sometime i get confused and it takes me a minute to figure out what is going on. anyway, that was an extremely long message, sorry. Update again soon.

im tired and i have a book to read next to me but iw anted to read this chapter first lol

i like teh story its pretty easy to follow and a good story line

so update

crazyLily

I love it! Keep going! :-)

It's pretty good. One thing though, brits dont celebrate thanksgiving, it's an american holiday...

aw sylvia and harrison are cute
and James... AW THAT WAS SWEET

update

Crazylily