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| Maddy77 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written! The slash seemed a tiny bit thrown in, like the story could have gone without it, but I did like it anyway. You really have a feel for the characters. I see that it's complete, so although I would have loved to read more, I like the element of uncertainty you've left with the reader. I will definitely be reading more of your work. |
| HollywoodVampire 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseaw come on! Completed? You have to continue! |
| elsa 2007-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw c'mon that's it? why not add more to that promising wesley/doyle relationship? add more please |
| E 2006-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great, add more? |
| Christine 2006-11-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, wow.. that was very good. I laughed out loud when I read the part that Doyle kissed Wesley... You should definately add to that.. what Angel and Cordy would do when they found out.. what would happen with Doyle.. Would he pick Wesley, or Cordelia.. and what would Angel and Cordy say if Wesley came out.. haha.. Yeah, that was really good. ~Christine |
| Willow-048 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. :) Looking fwd to the next chapter. |
| gopie 2006-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis looks very interesting. There's a dynamic already with them which I think is great. I wonder though how this will affect Wesley's position in the group - will it stay the same or change? And why did Doyle kiss Wes? Good characterisation for both. Nice first chapter. |
| DemonicSymphony 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI've said it before and I'll say it again. This rocks m'dear. |