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| ReJo 2007-10-23 ch 1,  | abuseYou're a very good writer :) This is my favorite line: Somehow, the front line of a war he had never been consciously aware of fighting had been transferred squarely into his everyday life, and, apparently, all the people he cared about were being made casualties of it’s progress. |
| Flamingo1 2007-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, I liked this a lot. Very nice job. Only one question: How'd they get the beer into the hospital? I've snuck quite a bit of stuff into hospitals over the years with nurses looking the other way, but I think they'd have gotten a bit persnickety about beer. Just a thought. |
| CryHope 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is really beautiful. Absolutely well written, and the dialogue is very canon-like. bo- |
| A 2006-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like how you write the Mac/Danny dialogue. Although, I can't see them drinking in a hospital room... |
| A 2006-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI agree with Mac's thoughts that Aiden was a great influence upon Danny, and he for her. Their relationship is quite different than the Danny/Lindsay relationship, and you touched on the reasons why in this story. Well done. :) |
| I Can Hear the Sea 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI liked it =) Aiden's not my favorite character but the the way you described her was awesome. |
| Aemie 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abusewow. congrats, you really captured danny in this, ya know? good work! |
| ameriker 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseamazing amazing job! I really hope you post more chapters soon! this was SO awesome! |
| LimeJuiceTub 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWow!! The discussion was very well written and expressed both Danny's and Mac's emotions clearly. It was very moving to read Danny's confession that he felt something more than friendship for Lindsay, and it was also a well written insight into the possible mental states of the characters. Well done! Keep up the great work! :D |
| dArkliTe-sPirit 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was really deep and very cool. In other words? I loved it to pieces, and, should anyone flame this, let me know - I have some very fierce flame-eaters. :D (faves this) |
| Leftyguitar 2006-07-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like it. I could definatly see this converstion occur shortly after CotP |
| mj0621 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE it!! Smacked and M&Ms!*sigh* those two really have to do something right? -mj(wgf) |
| snowbear96 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, on my faves list. |
| cindy 2006-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseBrilliant. I think you captured both men perfectly. Wouldn't be interested in a sequel? |
| Shortcake82 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was so great great, more please! |