oho! a great story :D but why in the humor section?

this is cute... and at the same time morbid and depressing. You have a knack for depressing and angsty stories.

Wow! ~ 17 minutes!

He must have just been wearing frames. Or he's just freakin' amazing at ignoring his body's own needs (you never know with him...). After all, he was supposed to go blind all the way, since he'd overstress his other eye, and he DIDN'T. So he must be pretty disciplined and controlled to be able to make sure that he could see and not stress his eye. *smack forehead* Well DUH! What else is new MR? Gawd, I'm so dense sometimes.

It was a lil scary how rational he was when he was trying to copy them -.-"

the second to last line was kinda cute ^_^ he sounded very childish

Dearest me. When did I get in the habit of reccing things and neglecting to reveiw the things I rec? Anyway, I'm quite impressed with this little drabble. Though it falls more into the Tokyo Babylon category than X, I was quite happy to stumble upon it. The effect of watching Seishirou as he observes humanity so impassively is quite fascinating. I can detect the faintest traces of rationalization in his reasoning as well. This just fits perfectly into canon. I mean, I could see it as one of those Annex shorts at the end of some of the TB manga volumes. :D Good job!

This is very well done. I love Seishirou's practical approach to coming up with an appealing persona, and the bit where he figures out just why his acting skills won't work is chilling.

That last line made me laugh. ^_^

LOL ^__^ Loved it! Seishirou trying to smile with feeling... It's true that if you don't really feel happiness, it would be hard to smile... To have a true expression of joy in your eyes... Anyways, I'm getting carried away.

Great job for it being written in such a short time! And it's REALLY kawaii XD I love Seishirou... And you did a good job with him!