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Masterofthee's minion
2007-08-11 . chapter 8
Howdy again! I love this story! The epiloge was especially hillarious! You should make a bear 2 with a sakunoxryoma theme. Just a suggestion...well looks like you did another great story! Kepp it up! Don't let your gaurd down! ^_^
Big Sister Kitty
2007-05-09 . chapter 8
Hee~ It’s so funny in such a nonsensical way.♪ So Inui was behind all of it, huh? X3 I love him even more for that. ♥ My my, you’re quite mean to Kuni-chan and Ryoma-kun. I just loved how you’ve exploited Taka-chan to Fuji’s whims.

Although I’ll admit it was somewhat far-fetched when Tezuka and Ryoma snapped because of a little thing like that, but then again, why else would your last two chapters be called “The Crazy Truth” and “The Insane Ending”?

Anyway, before I leave, I would like to give you a writer’s tip. I noticed that you used a lot of numbers in your fanfic, and just so you know, it’s sort of a rule that you have to write the numbers one to ten in words, not numerals. An addition to this rule is that you have to write the numbers out in words regardless of them numbering past ten when they are the first items to appear in a sentence. For example, instead of “2 days ago, a strange thing happened.”, it should be “Two days ago, a strange thing happened.”

Right, so now that I have nothing better to do, I’ll wait for you to update The Tulka. ‘Til then!

~Pellea
SilverCyanide
2006-07-16 . chapter 8
LOLOLOLOLOL! Tezuka in a hospital being insane, Ryoma snapping, and Inui's data about Ryoma and Sakuno. MWHAHAHAHAHA! Loved it. So.Funny.

P.S. WOOT TO WRITERS UNDER THE AGE OF 13! XD
FL1P-flop.
2006-07-15 . chapter 8
LOL AWW RYOMA AND SAKUNO!. haha, tezuka in a hospital?. XD. -runs over and visits him-.

You enjoyed writing this story?. pfft I ENJOYED READING IT WAY MORE THAN YOU LOL. I loved it and I think you should keep writing fanfiction :D. thank YOU for writing the bear, makes me happey lol

- FL1Pflop / KARenn!.

PS. Ill be looking forward to more!. :)
FL1P-flop.
2006-07-15 . chapter 7
LOL OMGSHH INUI YOU BUMM!. XD. -slaps him-. THATS what it was!.

aw Im sad it ended so son ;o;. RAAWR make another fanfic -shoves you-. I want more LOL. This is so sad, I click one more chapter and GONE!. FINITO!.

;o;

- FL1Pflop. / KARenn!.
FL1P-flop.
2006-07-15 . chapter 6
E THE BEAR IS HOLOGRAPHIC!?. FUJI-SENPAI!?. INUI!. Does inui like fuji?. LOL

I don't think you have any mistakes, at least, I can't point out any lol. I think EBERYTHING is god and I like it all if you ask mee :D.

-jumps to next chapter-. This is awesomee, theyre all just waiting for me!.

- FL1Pflop / KARenn!.
FL1P-flop.
2006-07-15 . chapter 5
AH I haven't read this in SO LONG it has sleep-deprived me!. stoopid summer school!. -kicks it-. Its the weekend now, so I've come back to read :3.

AHs LOL SOO FUNNY!. I SWEAR that Fuji is up to something!. -tsk tsk-. and Eiji kawaii!. when the bear licked him and he said it tickles LOL.

-runs off to read the next chapters-.

- FL1Pflop / KARenn!.
SilverCyanide
2006-07-13 . chapter 7
MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! Tezuka snapped first. What's odd is that when anything like this happens, while Tezuka seems calm I have a feeling he will *always* be the first to snap. Too much insanity from his team mates for him. Anyways, great job with this. Was a wonderful laugh. Shall read the epilogue as soon as it's up. *nods* Agains, good job. *wanders*
Sephyrah
2006-07-12 . chapter 6
Hey nice, it's quite fun still which is a good thing because there are some fics outhere that stop being like so after a few chapters, also I think this new Inui thing development is pretty good, i mean i'm so tired of seing how they always blame Fuji and having him being caught by surprise for once it's kind of funny.
SilverCyanide
2006-07-11 . chapter 6
OMG LOL INUI DID IT! This is a very weird story...but it's interesting. I like it. And from what I could tell, no major mistakes that pop out (since I'm to lazy to point out really minor mistakes...since I normally don't see them. *nods*) Update soon-ish. Can't wait to see how the rest of the regulars react to Inui. MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Old Fiat
2006-07-11 . chapter 2
that was totally wicked! keep up the good work! totally histarical, I can BEARly breath for laughing!
-old fiat, buy/drive fiat.
SilverCyanide
2006-07-02 . chapter 5
Nice. Can't wait for the next chap. Suspect #1 is totally Fuji. Suspect #2 is Taka-san...sorta...atleast for me. Suspect #3 is...um...Inui. #4 is um...dood...I'm gonna say somebody from like Hyotei Gakuen...cuz I feel like they should be in this fic. (OMG! IT'S LIKE SHISHIDO AND OHTORI.)*dies of laughter and her stupid ideas and wanders off to annoy more people*
FL1P-flop.
2006-07-01 . chapter 4
LOL Oishi has heearing problems XD. mann Fuji is cho ebil in here *__*. He's up to something and I know it!. >O. Hm.. I wonder if Fuji is the bear!. I really think he is ToT. Or mebbe it's Yuuta?. LOL. Update soon please :3

- FL1Pflop / KARenn!.
FL1P-flop.
2006-07-01 . chapter 3
ACK I only realized now this updated!. ToT.
LOL woow they're even informing teir parents!?. XD. heehee the mission has started!. >D. I find Kikumaru adorably cute in here -hearts-.

- FL1Pflop / KARenn!.
Sephyrah
2006-06-29 . chapter 3
This is quite comic I like it.
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