at the beginning i thought this would be another story of albel throwing himself on nel and nel just taking it like a . I was about to leave it but then you caught my eye and kept my eyes trained on the story and i congratulate you for that. Very beautiful way to keep the characters on their original behavior and yet revealing a much softer side to each while STILL staying on that true essence. Well done!

AW! how cute i just love alnel fics!

Aw. That was rather sweet. I don't think it was Crosell though, who knows. XD

Wow, this story was very suspenseful and (odd I say it) sexy. I loved the ending most of all, it was cute. Well done, keep it up.

Very very good.

This is a really good fic. I love how you collaborated their intrusively particular attitudes in such a way that it was real but still romantic i think I'll add this to my C2 thanks for the wonderfull additiion and I'll check up on soem of your other fics.

I love it!

Aw, now this is the part of the fic where Fayt runs in, snaps a picture and literally runs for his life. :-)

Kidding, very cute and sentimental. I liked it.

Killed my mood though. Oh well.

Uh, I'll email you later. I'm heading out for the first time this week.

:-)

That was so CUTE! You kept both of them in character very well. Both of them are so competitive, and stuborn, always wanting to prove them selves, so it makes sense that their relationship started with a kissing competition! At the same time, you bring in Albel's dark past, and add a more tender, serious mood to the story. VERY WELL DONE!

aw that's really nice

O= SO CUTE! Lovelovelove. I was smiling so hard after I read this... it was so sweet and nice and I loved it. I seriously hope to see more Alnel out of you soon!

Adding to favorites. Too cute to ignore.

AW!That was SO CUTE! anyways let me tell you tha t I havent written a review in like 3 years or far more! But you moved me SO MUCH that I just had to review no matter what!It was awsome! GREAT JOB!Send me an e-mail and lets chat if possible!

Okay, that was a gorgeous piece of writing. And you really pulled off a pair that are hard to do seriously, because there's a lot of doubt about their hate for eachother, but in this you turned that around and it was lovely! A great story, so thanks!!