Ohh i like this its funny ^_^

After many days of reading, I've just finished thie story, and I have to say, this is not only one of the best Kingdom Hearts stories I've read, but also one of the best stories of all I've read in my life. :D There were so many beautiful moments. Happy ones, sad ones, fearful ones...there's only one explanation as to why this story is so good thoughout, and that is you are an amazingly talented author. :) The moments between Sora and Kairi were simply beautiful. The ending was really sad. I was hoping Kairi would be rescued. But oh well. I just hope she'll be okay...

Hope you'll write more stories as good as this in future. :)

OHMYGAWD!
*tackles Roxas*
Me: I LOVE YOU!
Roxas: Uh... hi?
omg i LOVE the phantom he's amazing
<3
this is really well written!

Now I thought that this story was absolutely brilliant as your 10+ reviews have shown. I couldnt put it down from the moment I started and I really wish I could have finished it sooner. I felt deep sorrow for Sora's plight after Kairi was taken and thats the goal of every author. You got me emotionally involved in your story to which I say well done. The only thing that bothered me about the story which I hope you improve upon in the future, is the amount of violence in this story. There was a lot of physical fighting which bore no results. The whole rivalry between Yuna's gang and Organization XI was a war of attrition. That and Yuna's plots were only truly sinister when she contacted Kairi's father. I thought the whole Traverse Town Police thing was odd. Yuna just wasnt all that compelling of an antagonist. Kairi's father, with his creepy scenes on the phone, really made my blood run cold, I always viewed him as the main antagonist. Speaking of Kairi's father, in my personal opinion, the abuse of Kairi was just too intense. Being nearly killed isnt something you just get over. Kairi would have had to been admitted to a psych ward and been under constant medical surveillance to make sure her mind was in tact. Now, I can understand regular physical abuse and being okay with it later on in life, but something as gruesome as being almost killed by a parent is not something that a bit of crying can help with. It totally messes up your mind. Other than those bits, the story as I stated was absolutlely compelling and excellent. I look forward to reading more of your work.

ITS HER DAD! IM 100% SURE! okay, 75% sure, see ya (leaves to go to next chapter

sorry for asking (im such an idiot sometimes i know lol) but is anemia what happens when u forget stuff? i know i know ur thinking "god is she stupid or what?" but the truth is i dont know how to write it

KYA! okay i know its weird ppl how i always review with at least one thing with caps on, but come on wouldnt u scream if u had carmelldansen stuck in ur head? anyway very very good chapter. ive been jealous before, it was enough to make me almost want to hate the preson, by the way u should do that with roxas an namine, although im pretty sure this story is almost done, srry for the ling review! bibi!

P.s sora and kairi are just to cute together!

this is very intresting. this defintely wanted me to read the rest. omg, 31 chapters. YAY!

My goodness, with nearly each chapter
I read your writing has improved!
I must say, I am impressed.

Ahh! I noticed something.
"She hadn’t known the brunette had so much rage."
You see, brunette is the feminine name for brown hair,
whereas for a man one would say 'brunet".
Just a little tidbit! I mean no offense!

This story is wonderful so far.
I adore all the little personalities and quirks everyone has,
and I am particularly fond of your Hayner x Olette. So adorable.

ANYWAY!
Back to reading, right? c:

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Such a beautiful story. I cried so much during this chapter.

Hiya I am Way 2 Dawn Riku
in ur 2 story u could say the girl looks like kairi but then dies her hair black and says her name is Xion... :S
and could riku lulu axel demyx maybe sora get back @ yuna 4 what they did to kairi^_^

OH NO!I bet it's her daddy!

YAY!I love Vivi!And I'm in love with your story!

GO SELPHIE!