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| Naomi 2008-02-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow, I like this story! That Markus is a $%#%$#%$#$@#@^&^8! Poor Ramone! Poor Lightning, he's in trouble now! What is his plan? Why is this fic discontinued? |
| PsychFan81692 2007-11-21 ch 5, | abuseI know this story is a little old (I see 2006 was the last time it was updated), but it's seriously good! I wish you would finish it! It's honestly a great start! |
| top seceret 2007-04-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseGreat story! Love the plot and can really imagine this going on. The only thing is...YOU NEED TO UPDATE! Apart from that its all good and i hope the ending isn't a complete flop (i'm sure it won't be!) updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdaupdateupdateupdateupdateteupdateupdate |
| smile-clarenet 2007-01-05 ch 4, | abuseI think I know what Lightning has planned, I just hope you haven't done anything to him. I don't mind if you do something to Markus, he deserves to get hurt. |
| smile-clarenet 2007-01-05 ch 3, | abuseStill enjoying this story. I can kind of link with Sally in this one. I was bullied for a lot of my school years, not fun I can tell you. Great story so far. |
| smile-clarenet 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if you meant that to be a little on the humour side or not, but it's great. I can just see that Thunder Bird now. Reminds me of some kids I went to school with. |
| 999999999 2006-11-19 ch 5, | abusehey this is great! please update soon! |
| 999999999 2006-11-19 ch 4, | abusefavourite cars story so far! poor red! hooked on this story- you've done a great job! right, i've off to read the next chapter... |
| Ted 2006-11-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseI like how you're portraying Lightning in this one; he's one gutsy racecar! |
| Buick Regal Racecar 56 2006-10-30 ch 2, | abuseLove this story. Sorry to review and run, but it's bed time here for me. |
| Buick Regal Racecar 56 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abuseOh, pretty cute! Wingo is actually my favorite, ain't ya Wingo? Wingo: Umm, of all the Cars characters or just the DRH? BRR86(Buick Regal Racecar 86): Of the DRH, stupid! Chick Hicks is my favorite Cars character! Chick Hicks: And I swear by god's green earth you had better stop naming yourself after me! BRR86: Shut up Chick Hicks: Whatever Anyway, love the story. |
| Chesire bird 2006-08-21 ch 5, | abuseCool i liked that one. don like da thunderbird though. snot rod was funny,keep going. |
| Three Wooden Crosses 2006-08-07 ch 5, | abuse*applause* This is perfect, absaloutly perfect!! This was just the story I was looking for!! I am a total Cars fan as well. I love this story!! Best one I've read so far! Update soon!! |
| NAME AND ADDRESS WITHHELD 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abuseOo, I didn't read this until now, and I LOVE it! This story is so in character, and I love how Lightning and Sally are *almost* together in this. It's gorgeous to see LightningSally. It's an amazing story, and a great plot. Keep up with it! |
| Steph1323 2006-08-02 ch 5, | abuseGood chapter! Update soon! I wanna know what Lightning's plans are..lol |