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| MissMarauder4487 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good especially 4 a 1st story. -ILuvJackSparrowMoreThanU- :) |
| Greeneyed-Elfin-Girl 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked the way you ended it by saying "The rest is history". That was awesome! I saw a slight OOCiness with how Lily couldn't yet do the Summoning Charm properly...I mean, she was known for being good at Charms. But this was a really nice one shot! ^_^ |