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| i-am-invisible 2006-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow, not bad. Could've had more detail at the end there, especially when their parents died. Also, I think Remus and Peter should have been in the story too. "I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WOULD JUBBA HUBBA DING!" -- lol! that was funny. [A good idea, too... you could write a really funny oneshot about that... sorry, i'm rambling.] But anyway, yeah it was very good. I enjoyed it. :] |