Hey! Are you going to continue this one? Because I really want you to! Pretty please?

Great job so far. Keep it up.

Despite the lack of a true plot, the character interactions and dialogue is simply priceless.
I Love it, please do continue!

This chapter is good, and peachy keen. Have a splendiferous day tomorrow. Keep smiling, and be of good cheer. :-) Please have the goodness to write additional chapters if you can.

closer in-betweens would be wonderful but the fact that you are posting updates has me happy enough.

sweet date, and confessions(!)

delighted,
ginny

that is hilarous. i am very curious about the apples though.

insert random french name here. *snorts* thats good.

Good chapter today. Keep smiling and those fingers typing. :-)

and here i thought it was pronounced 'ginny' =/

entertain me goblin king!? and he's bound to do it!? *sly chuckles* he can come in handy when you're late for something. good interactions, descriptions

happy healthy update reward:

::chocolate coma::
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

:and encouragement (bribe) to continue.

thank you,
ginny

good
It is funny

No way, This chapter is halarious.

This is pretty great so far! The "Oh naked king of the Goblins" was a nice and funny touch, lol. Keep it up!

only you have the power! a tour, so to speak... a tour through the workings of your limitless imagination. we, your readers are but humble toruists... you are the guide... and YOU own the ride!

>=]

Why do think you have to delete it? I think it's fine and funny just the way it is. I'd like to read more.

love it!

Awesome.
I hope you continue with this as it is really interesting even if it is short.