This was freaking stunning and beautiful. I love it to pieces! I don't know what City of Angels is so WOOHOO! AND I LOVE STUFF LIKE THIS. I'm a sucker for romance and you just gave me my daily fixing of fluff.

Great work!

Thank you for a good story that did not give me a coma. :D

Seriously, I was waiting for this couple to have a good get together at the end BUT NOOO! They just looked like best friends, bro and sis. Thanks you.

And I don't know what City of Angels is, so you're safe. FOR NOW...

...I totally didn't know her friend could walk yet...i didn't know who the final boss was ether...but eh i'll let you have it it was good. lol

OMG ILY XDD I was laughing when he was coming back to life though. Just the wording and the fact he got himself smacked in the head, I don't know I'm a bit of a saddist.

"Ash's head collided with the beam. He hit it with such force, he teetered and, in a daze, toppled down the stairs to land on his back. Thankfully some-what cushioned by the hearth rug. He blinked the moisture from his eyes before releasing himself to the darkness that threatened to take his vision.

Finally. Ash'd been gifted the death he'd so desperately asked for. So he thought."

Thank you so much again for the read D

I love romance stories like this :3 3 so thank you for putting on just the sorta thing I was looking for! It said on wiki that Marona was 13, and so I thought she would be 18 here, and gosh that confused me. But still, we don't know the official ages right o-o... or did I miss something? Thanks for the good read D

THAT. WAS. SO. CUTE. I'm gonna go read it a couple thousand times again _

W-wow. That was...great!

I really enjoyed it!

XD Had tears in my eyes at the end

XD Over-exposure of fluff and cliché-ness won't put you in a coma...XD it's good for the soul! Lolol.

tyhat was nice but i have to go take my medicen or il puck lol j/k it was a little fluffy but what made him alive again what if marona used revive on ash lol

yea hes svrewed

Woah...Good Story! I love it.YOu did a good job...A very good one.True I haven't beat the game,so I shouldn't have read this..but oh well.I loved it,and that's what counts.

(( Truth is I'm not even fast the First Chapter 2 mission...but I am level 26 already.I do have the book,so oh well.))

ANyway...Great Story!

AWQWWE THE CUTESY CUTESY CUTESYNESS!

AAW TE CUTENES! Now, kick it up to T and put...more! BWAHAHAHAHAHHA im done

This fanfic was just so adorable! :3 Keep up the great writing!

MY HEART ESPLODED! D: YOU OFFICIALLY WIN!

omg. i was just wandering in the phantom brave section, and then i see your name...Q_Q; oh thankyou THANKYOU! Q_Q;;

i really like the fluffiness. CX it gave me a fluffy feeling in my heart. again. o_o;

Well, fluff and cliche-ness are good for health sometimes, don't they? XD

Though I don't think your fanfiction is cliche. You've done a good job for AshMarona happy ending _

But maybe you could make a sequel, and tell us why Ash turned into human. Please write a sequel, that would be nice :)