Hello!! Love the fic...is this a one shot or will you end up putting more chapters on it?

That was amusing.

Ohh loove this story! It's original and good written! I really do hope you'll update, and.. heh, since they're "borrowers" well.. Hook really can't be expecting to REALLY keep his silverware?

I love this, the twisted logic is brilliant! please do more, this may not fare as well as a story but you really should do the dinner scene on the ship, that could be great fun! keep going!

hhehehhehehehehehehe! I love so far! Continue! I love Twitchy! (PS...is that from that movie...with the caffine hyped up squrriel?)

i love this. those girls really are very good with words and are very original. interesting how they can disarm hook with language better than the croc can, having taken his hand. you should at least do the dinner scene to continue this but i don't know if this is the type of story that would hold if made very long. if another chappie is done, i might know then, really good so far!

hehe, this is so cool! darn it i was going to write a story kinda the same!!

lol

Luv Em x

Hey, that was a nice, refreshing, funny story. Good job! Quite humorous in fact. I don't think it should be a one-shot. Why don't you write more chapters? There is a lot of scope that you can expand on. The next chapter should elaborate on the dinner they share with Captain Hook. Then write about everyday life abord the Jolly Roger.
In fact, why not turn it into a romance? One of them 'hooks' up (pun intended there, hehe) with Captain Hook, the other hooks up with Peter. Peter and Hook bury the hatchet and they all live happily ever after in Neverland. Isn't that lovely?
So, ahem, do update and continue this story! It's too abrupt an ending to this chapter to be a one-shot. And it would be so nice if you could turn it into a full-fledged story!
Hope you consider my suggestion! Good work, keep it up! :)

Hehe, I love Twitchy and Small Fry and their good logic, this was great for a laugh.Seeing this continued would be great!