hmm... Interesting. Very well-written.

Ohh nice... to bad its complete. Oh and one correction: she coludn't leave the animals. It should be she couldn't leave the Animals. Elphaba was helping the Animals. Excellent story though.

continue

elphie

Fea should be Fae, just so ya know :D. Other than that I liked it a lot, especially that last line, that was an excellent end. I like the two perspectives as well and Elphaba being a little dreamy but forcing herself to reality. Nice job!