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DragonRider8
2007-08-02 . chapter 6
Will do! I'm looking forward to it!
~DR8 aka Em
Jate-JoDe
2006-08-18 . chapter 5
I wanna first apologize for not reviewing like forever, real life can be a ** sometimes. I just finished reading all 4 chapters and seriously wow amazing stuff. I love how you descibed the scenes and the emotions alltogetheter, simply brilliantly. The wedding and the vows were so beautiful. The ending was a tipycal happy ever after, the way I like it. YAY for Jate. And I'm very pleased to hear that you are a Creed fan as am I. And the lyrics were just a beautiful touh. And I can't wait for the reunion story. Awesome job!!

Ella
DragonRider8
2006-07-15 . chapter 5
FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC! I am SO glad that you made it longer! It was a BRILLIANT story right from the beginning to the very end! The wedding was really beautiful and the vows were so sweet! I also read your Choice Series. It's REALLY good and I cannot wait for you to continue it! I'm also looking forward to the reunion story, I really hope that you write it!
~DragonRider8
FoxBlues
2006-07-14 . chapter 5
that was a great chapter! so sweet, so beautiful. but i'm so sad it's the last one. anyway, great work, loved ur fic!
MagicSwede1965
2006-07-14 . chapter 5
Nice work, Niece! The mixup with Jack's tie was a cute touch, and you write great wedding vows. :) Minor grammatical stuff, but I'll let it go (unless you really WANT me to be a stickler, LOL). Well done!
CrAzYhOrSeGiRl88
2006-07-14 . chapter 5
Wow, I'm gone for a few days and suddenly you've got 2 new chapters up! I have to say I'm incredibly pleased. I loved both of them, particularly chapter 4. Both were very well written and of course Creed is awesome! I'm glad you decided to add to the fic! ^_^
Brennan4Booth
2006-07-13 . chapter 5
omg that was beautiful!
avenueofthestars
2006-07-13 . chapter 5
I loved the way this story thrived off of emotions, the song lyrics completed each chapter.. The story was graceful, and amazing.. I loved it.
Draco's-Loyal-Longing
2006-07-13 . chapter 5
Ooh, write the spinoff, I can't wait to read that! This chapter was beautiful, and i think you're right, that was a good place to end it. It was really sweet! Thank you for writing such an awesome story!
Kate Shephard
2006-07-13 . chapter 5
That was very sweet.
And his name is Sam. ^.-
helaluvE
2006-07-13 . chapter 4
i really enjoyed your story because i love you writing. can't wait for the epilogue.
MagicSwede1965
2006-07-13 . chapter 4
No, not too sappy, just nice and sentimental. There's one thing I have a smallish problem with though...you dropped an author's note in the middle of a paragraph. It's OK to explain something, but it's better to wait till the end (you could have put it in with your final notes in the chapter)...otherwise it completely breaks the rhythm of the story and yanks the reader out of the characters' world, back to cold hard reality. That's the last thing you want to have happen! Keep on pluggin', and I look forward to the epilogue.
J.Svensson
2006-07-12 . chapter 4
I hope it'll be a happy ending, I love happy endings :D Amazing chapter btw :D
Brennan4Booth
2006-07-12 . chapter 4
aw cute!!
nikki-da-latina
2006-07-12 . chapter 4
loved it :D very nice :D yay for happiness! :D
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