Wow.
That was brilliant.
Incredibly tragic and extremely sad...
But brilliant.
Def. going on ze faves list.
Nice work ;)
Ash xx

Oh my god, that was perfect. Finally, something different; someone who didn't write a happy ending. Thank you so much!

i loved it
great job

aww..that's sad!! you need to update asap!!

Good Lord that depressing. It made me cry almost as much as the movie. (actually nothing could make me cry as much as the movie)

You...you..sputtering...you killed off Peter Pan. How could you! Just kidding. This story is great. It makes me feel so sad about both Peter and Wendy.

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