Been reading since the beginning, even if I haven't reviewed. At least, not under this name. If you were trying to break your two year record for the last chapter, please don't. It makes the rest of us bald.

this is awesome! hope u post another chapter soon since its been 2 years and all lol... anyways great story and great duo characterisation... if its possible id love to see some fanart on duo's work on the controllers aswell... tc care and here's to hoping u write soon... cheers!...

-halas

I really like this fic! It gives a great introperspective to Duo's mind without being angsty or too romantic like many other fics. Amazing! I hope you will keep on writing - just some more to go! Good luck!

Good work. Thanks for the distraction from my finals - with how my nerves are I seriously needed it.

Thank you for writing this...it's so unique...I hope that your fingers heal ok and that you're able to get the next chapter out quickly!

Good chapter...

You've done this really well...express the depression I mean..I'm going through something like this myself, so I can see how subtle it is...sometimes, the subtlety of depression is the most damning thing..

happy you updated finally cant wait tell the next one

This story is fantastic. I love the emotion and how you are potraying the characters.

well, this story has really grown on me. Character development is great, plot is fairly unique without losing the essence of the characters. I really like Phoenix and her interactions with Duo. They are adorable together, even if it is only a brother/sister relationship. I hope the next chapter is on its way, because I longing for more

Syl

WHAT HAVE HAPPEND TO YOUR HAND?ARE YOU OK?

I'm loving this story, and the way you've used the lyrics to Evanescence's Away from Me. It's like a song-fic, but the story doesn't revolve around the lyrics. However, Origin is a good album to listen to while reading the story. I enjoy seeing Duo portayed with legitimate depression that isn't borderline the problems of an aneroxic teenaged girl. I'm gonna read on, and I'm looking forward to it

I'm glad that you were able to continue writing this wonderful story. Thank you for sharing the story!

I hope things improve for you soon!

Oo, I wasn't expecting anohter bit of this so soon. Good luck with your hand... I know what it's like to be out of commission for a while, though not quite in the same sense. Looking forward to more whenever you an manage it... and I know being able to mutter at someone about story or just life is helpful, so feel free to contact me if you want. I'm really glad I stumbled on your profile, even though I was trying to find someone else when I did. Anyone who thinks mistakes and getting lost are bad things is just depressed, I think.

I really like this, it's an unusual take on Duo, you rarely see him written as a workaholic. I'm sorry to see it's on hold, and hope you get back to it soon. Your writing style is fun, and it's hard to find GW fics with good characterization, I'm sure you know. Thanks for the read, I'm gonna throw this on my alerts...