I liked this a lot. The flashback scenes were particularly poignant, and I was surprised to find myself hoping that Omi _wouldn't_ kill Hirofumi. I was relieved when he didn't. From the amount of time it's been since your last update, it looks like you're not going to continue this, and that's kind of too bad, because it would have been a real cool read.

MORE MORE MORE

we want more, you are good at this writing-stuff. makes it exciting that Omi is remembering his past - confused poor little Omi. continue pleaseeeee

This is really good! Could you make another part soon?

If Neil doesn't start working on the next chapter soon, please beat him! _ I like the plot line you have here. I never thought about what could happen if Omi-kun failed that mission. You've got a great thing going here so don't stop writing! Ja ne! _