I thought you had some good characterization going. It was dark without being too heavy or over the top. Oddly enough, there was something poignant and not sweet but strangely endearing about the way you wrote it. It's hard to identify fully with characters like these but you root for their twisted romance like any fairytale couple/starcrossed lovers especially the way you've written it. My only issue was with the way he ended it. To me, his physical violence is less crunching and more slapping. Quickly and viciously inflicting pain, not showing off strength or breaking what is his in a way that would destroy it's beauty. Cartoons can always bounce back, but I never saw him as doing something to break her to that degree, hurt her yes, but not break her. I love the last line though. It just works so well with the way you built up to it. Well done. Thanks for a good read.

Much love, Cat

Very dark yet I enjoyed the fic

That was... alright. A bit anticlimactic and disappointing, but overall the phrasing and tone was pulled together enough and it was nice to read.

I don't give pleasant reviews...well, almost ever, so don't feel too discouraged.

haha, loved it! =)

hell Mista J would hate to have me as a pet...i'd be beggin him to abuse me 24/7 and then he'd get no fun out of it XD great little short that was. People think that blow jobs are degrading but, in all actuallity, the one giving it is the one in control, it's a nice role reversal between them even if it's only for a few moments. Great read!

I LOVE THIS STORY!! Definitely turned me on and the end made me laugh. Wow, I'm a sick twisted person. But I love them...

SQUE

My favourite parts:
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She was his living doll, the pretty toy he broke into a million pieces
and reassembled by hand, made in his own twisted image.

His.
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It was like bringing a god to his knees, Harley thought dreamily as he
emptied himself into her with a gasping shudder.

that was fucked up, i mean the very very end that is. anyway I liked it!

I want you to be happy. lol

This was a good fanfic. I liked it. I wish it was longer though.
I hate the fact that Joker treates her like shit and she still loves him. It seems a bit weird, but to be honest, it would be the same with me. If I got the chance to be with Joker, he could beat me up too. lol

wow i really loved this one! just great!

beautiful, sadistic, and perfect. i really need to start writing HarleyxJoker stories again, i just need to finish my chaptered story. but you must write more, it's addicting and very classy porn indeed.