 stinaljos 2008-02-02 . chapter 27Loved it:) Awesome! |
 SaoirseWaveglow 2007-10-16 . chapter 27OK, that gunther knife gag REALLY got old. But, the great story more than made up for the over abundant gunther knife gags. XD
Wonderful! Simply amazing story! I enjoyed every moment reading it. You should be very proud of your work. ^.^
Well done!!
:D Saoirse |
 Saloma-Kiwi 2007-05-01 . chapter 27"…it looks like you will just have to take that one.”" YAY! I really enjoyed this story! Thank you! ^_^ And yes, the Gunther knife! FINALLY! *yells to the sky* I NOW POSSESS THE MOST VALUBLE KNOWLEDGE ON THIS SITE! *notices everyone gaping at her* Eh... erm... anyway...
I really love how you ended it without telling us, adding it in your note instead! ^_^
I've enjoyed every step! |
 forgot_to_log_in 2007-02-06 . chapter 27 Thank you for telling me what it was! it was going to kill me! Anyway, good story! |
 DragonGirl 2007-01-29 . chapter 27 I kind of figured a gunther knife was a steak knife. Just an assumption, really.
Really dramatic, and a great story! So fast-paced I had to read some chapters twice to make sure I understood what was going on! Really great! |
 DragonGirl 2007-01-29 . chapter 1 Yep, you hooked me. I shall keep reading because this sounds massively interesting! |
 goddess of darkness3 2007-01-28 . chapter 27This really is a good fic, but the gramatical errors can be confusing at times.
You tend to use the homophones of many words by accident.
For example:
heal (to make healthy) instead of heel (the back part of the foot)
weather (the temperature/storm conditions/etc) instead of whether (a word used to introduce an alternative)
there (an indication of place) instead of their (belonging to them)
stake (a woden post used as part of a fence/to kill vampires) instead of steak (a slice of meat that is, aparently, eaten with a gunther knife on Tamaran)
And you will occasionally put apostrophies in words that aren't posessive, just pluralized.
Also, and you only did this once that I saw, but in chapter 24, when describing Robin and X's fight, you used "then" three times in the same paragraph. Try using other adjectives like "suddenly" as well, or just cutting out a "then" or two entirely.
In the scene when you introduced Starfire and Blackfire, you described Blackfire's hair as "ravenous," which means "extremely hungry," when I think you mean "raven," which means "black"
Finally... just a question which I may have missed the answer to, but why didn't Raven try to heal Cyborg? (I apologize if you did answer that in the story)
So, yeah. I really liked this fic. All the characters were in character, the plot was solid, there was none of the unnecessary angsting that plagues most TT fanfiction, and you wrote for my favorite pairings. So, please, don't feel put down by my comments. You've got the really important stuff down. |
 Nidoking16 2007-01-28 . chapter 27Finally! I have gotten my lazy butt out here to read this!
Really great stuff! I cannot wait to see what else comes out of that head of yours. :D Truly great finisher to a great story. And THAT's what a gunther knife is... I was dyin' over here. ;P Well, ciao! |
 tuneia103 2007-01-23 . chapter 27so... a gunther knife is a stake knife? FINALLY! i can sleep easier know that i have this useful knowledge. KEEP ON WRITING PLEASE! |
 RobinxStarfireLuvr 2007-01-16 . chapter 27WOW! This was really an extrodinary last chapter! LOVED IT! What an excellente' story! I just couldn't get over of how wonderful it was! I really liked reading it! Please, update a new story or a sequel soon! And keep it up! |
 samuraigurl1213 2007-01-16 . chapter 27Hm... I didn't except you to tell us a gunther knife, but it was rather funny in a way to bring that up. However... after all that happens, the first thing on Robin's mind is what is a gunther knife?
Really, I only remember because you kept reminding me of it, after all that happened to me, that wouldn't be the first question I'd ask.
Plus, it's probably a Tamarian butter knife.
-Em
PS- NICE ENDING! |
 torral11 2007-01-16 . chapter 27I loved the chapter and I hope Robin and Kory get married and I hope Robin starts the Teen Titans Please update soon |
 Nidoking16 2007-01-06 . chapter 26NO! Cliffys are EVIL! ;P
Well, that's it. I have read all of your stories. ^^
And I loved all of them. Keep going! I can't wait to see what goes on next! :D I like the roles you have placed them in. This AU is very good. I will definately be looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Saloma-Kiwi 2007-01-03 . chapter 24"At first, her entire being was numb. Then, aggravating hurt made its way through her system. Barely able to move, she weakly lifted herself onto her arms. She felt blood on her face and front, and her bones felt broken in more then three places. Agony throbbed through her body like poison. She tried to scream, but the incident had robbed her of her breath." This is an excellent description of true pain! You have finally done what I wish I could do, lol. I salute you for it! You can practically FEEL Starfires pain! *Kudos for you* |
 Saloma-Kiwi 2007-01-03 . chapter 23I love how you ended the chapter, lol
"What do we do?"
"Pray."
That was perfect. ^_^ |