This was such a lovely story.Beautiful. Nice touch with the song. And naming Makayla was cute.

SO EFFING CUTE!

Wow...just love John and Teyla stories. Those two belong together. Of course John would have a hard time letting go of his guilt, that's so like him. And Teyla being Teyla, she could always read him like a book. Beautifully written piece...keep the stories coming!

That was really beautiful. One of the best John/Teyla fics I have read. They were both so in character it made it very realistic. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

*claps madly* that was absolutely brilliant! Going to watch the vid now!

ah...loved it! Too nice! excellently written and soo enjoyable!

beautifully done. not normally as Sheyla person, but i think you just made me a convert, Mcshep no more- i follow a new religion! lol