This was great! I love the way you write and I love how you wrote the characters. Great job.

I LOVE IT! This was the best story I have read on Fanfiction, EVER! I am not lying, this was... oh gosh there are no words to describe the epicness! And the fact it was actually friendship, that is... I love this story, it IS my favorite!

Best oneshot in history of fanfiction...

Wow. I'm quite speechless. This is.. the best story I've ever read! Your idea is so great... and i really like stories about Manjoume and his brothers. And it's cool that he took Fubuki, the crazy guy with him :)

In some places, I felt sorry for poor Jun...

but Fubuki was there to comfort him! Again, I was really impressed. 3

I snickered all the way through.

XD Brilliant! I love Fubuki and I spent most of the time reading the bit near the end, plotting ways to kill those two...AUGH! (I can't think of a word bad enough.) ...I did the same thing watching the episodes they were in... Great righting, and alot of it made me smile

I finally have something helpful to say. There was simply a small mistake in the upcoming sentence, simply remove the were. Your stories are always lovely but usually I have nothing to say that is constructive as it tends to be spot on. Well heres one little thing. (:

A few people who were followed the dueling circuit asked him and Fubuki to go out into the courtyard to give a demonstration of their skills in battle.

This just made me so happy. It was...I don't know cute isn't the word for it, but it was great.

I want you fat fanfiction faggot babies. I know that's, like, the most constructive review ever, but you can expect AIM glomps from me about it later.

P.S. If I said you write my favorite GX ficcage, think the other ladies would get jealous? XD

your story was brilliant! love it!

Very good job, a story I read a lot.

luv this story

Sweet! It's about time Jun's brothers got what they deserved. Way to go Fubuki!

HAHA to tell you the truth i dont really read long stories but for some reason i stuck to your story! although it is lengthy, but it's really nice too! :)) great job.

Wow, that was GREAT! Really, really good. I know you appreciate constructiv critisism, but I'm afraid I don't have any to offer you - the story was flawless. Everyone in-character, humour, drama and a happy ending. What more could a reader ask for?

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