That's...Nice...

Are you going to write more?

It does *not* stink! I think it's very good, and you got Jimmy in there! Yaaaaaaaaay!

brilliant, darling. i can't wait to get toad back so that quinn can get out of those icky normal clothes. *nods*. keeeeep writing!

Interesting story. You write the Lone Gunmen characters well, and I think Quinn is a well developed character. I hope there's more to this.

you have a strange world, hoodoo. but you are so very cool. keep it up! :)

Though you have a point about the chapters being drawn out, I thought the jump from chapter 2 to chapter 3 was confusing. I'm really liking this story, but I wish you'd point more background information into it. Where were they in chapter 3? How did Toad get there? That sort of thing.

And... thank you for bringing Quinn back from the dead. I always thought she was really cool. *mutters evil things about Alexis, then grins*. Not trying to be greedy, but I do hope that's not the end. *hint*.

*purs*. You're definitely evil, lass. :)