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| Sarai 2008-01-20 ch 22, | abuseAwesome! |
| paddington 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abusepretty good |
| P'tfami 2006-10-25 ch 22, | abuseThe storyline was a bit too idealistic, but snce it was in a dream sequence I can imagine Laura editing the less happy scenarios in her dream. A sweet, if albeit mushy story that was pretty entertaining. Good job. |
| Starclipper01 2006-08-19 ch 22, | abuseWow! What a beautiful story... This brought back memories of me and my sister growing up watching this fun show. I'm glad you wrote it. Great storytelling. Regards, starclipper01 |
| bookwrangler 2006-07-14 ch 22, | abuseIt was well worth hanging on until the end. Well crafted story and I enjoyed it completely. Thank you. |
| bookwrangler 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseHaving a pretty good idea that all is not what it seems, I have to say this story is very bittersweet. Very beautiful... I do hope things work out. -Becca |
| bookwrangler 2006-06-29 ch 2, | abuseHopefully this will end up reality and not just a dream. It isn't so bad. Don't be so ** ourself. I look forward to the next installment. - Becca |