aww, I'm sad that you ended it at four chapters. I would've liked it if you continued. but anyways, nice fic.

*stares at screen*

holy f-k was that a good chapter. just everything about it was great.

Harrowing but utterley readable, brilliant work I've enjoyed every minute

*opens and closes mouth like a dumb trout* - speechless here. Man, wasn't expecting that, and neither were the others. Now I understand why the military spend so much time cleaning... therapeutic. I also expected her to get with Carson, for some reason ;) but the bond with Shep was really good. Amazing. Really, really good stuff. Thanks! Oh, and when Carson said 'You're only human' man I could have died of meep there and then. Brilliant.

Very WEll done

Kira

Woah. That was incredible. I must have missed this somehow, realised when I got the Ch4 alert. Amazing stuff. What is it with all the cleaning in the military, hehe. Nice catch. A great chapter with all the injury and interaction. And she's flipped? Cool.

I really like that your not just writing without knowing...if you get my drift

Kira

interesting

Kira

Brilliant

update soon

loved that Ronon 'guided' Williams to make a return trip to the infirmary. How military of him.

and the kids following McKay around.

then the ending, holy crap. you really know how to pull punches in writing.

amazing how one word -classified- can automatically convey so much.

fab from beginning to end.

Nice, anyone who shut's up McKay is worthy of respect ;)

Hey! How bloody brilliant was that? I knew it was going to be good, but this good? *shakes your hand* The final part of the conversation, after she revealed her location as 'classified', was pure genius, there was humour, acidity, and the ending was just creepy enough to make us all shiver. The way you portray her as so different, so alone, so competent, is marvellous. I forget, did you promise she would have a happy ending? *wonders*

Aw, bless her cotton socks! You have to post more! OK, so I know I'm late, and I really apologise, but this was fabulous. Real emotion, intrigue, great squee ;) I almost died when Beckett showed up - great moment :D If she ends up happy, please post more ;)