I hope that you will update again soon. Thanks.

Hm... interesting that Mrs. Evans becomes Mrs. Granger right in the middle of that. You really need to do more showing rather than just reporting how the characters are feeling...

Why did you call lily's mum Mrs. Granger? WAs it a typing era

Awsome please write more and update soon

Its good, please finish it!

you seriously need to put more details and don't rush the story.

A basilisk can not turn thing to stone

more please give me more to read

This is a pretty good fic! Please update when you get the chance! I actually kinda hope this is a Harry/Lily since this is before Harry was born and Lily isn't his mother... yet.

nice one good one great one ... a relationship between em is okies cause hes not datin his mum ... genetically he is but since she dont know im and then meets him ... she turns out different so the relationship is okies cause there two different people ... anyways rant over ... GREAT SO UPDATE

Keep Writing! I'm enjoying the story.

the storys good I just don't like how you ended the chapter with him just apparating away with out him saying anthing or anything else happening. other than that it was pretty good.

that was awesome

You mispelled a word in your title. I thought you should know, though I refuse to read something that has a mispelling in its title and thus won't read the fic. Sorry, but that's a ground rule of mine.

Hi, nice story. I love pairing Harry/Lily. Please continue