Jake-san is really going all out with weapons... And teh car is finally finished! Adn nice idea on making Itachi a Double Agent!

This is a really good story line! I love it!

I love it!

I made a sountrack for this.

Nine thou-Styles of Beyond

Click Click Boom-Saliva

Guerilla Radio-Rage Against the Machine

And more please PM me back I sent you like six messages about stuff and you haven't replied.

those are heavy BBs. They can and will kill someone. But I think that they'd have to get closer then how far Jake was to get a hit which is why I wouldn't want to shoot someone wiht a BB, I'd just use bullets. In my opinion you have to get to close for comfort.

So far so good keep it up.

Very nice guns, I recently finished Final fantasy 7 Dirge of Cerberus, and thanks to that I may have another OC with an attitude based on my own with a heavely modified version of my faverote gun, I will send you a profile on him and if you like it you can use him in this story.

How do you know so much about guns?

Out of curiosity why are you having Meiru learn the Chidori?

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this is going to be a simple review, UPDATE SOON!

What is it with people updating at five in the morning? Also something tells me that we are going to have two very beaten minions on our hands.

lol all i can say is go hinata

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

UPDATE PLEASE!

you realize thated take jonin level chakra to make 50 kage bushins right? eh any pretty interesting idea all together i give it a B not the but it doesnt suck its ok