:3 love the story

Argh D8

it stopped...but...why?!

That was getting good, I hope you get more chapters up. If not, I'll just have to make up my own ending in my mind...thats not as exciting though ;P

Best chapter so far I think :D And not just because of the smut ;) but because of all the emotion shown in Roxas's emotional breakdown.

Men are so cute when they cry XD

GWAHAHAHAHAHAHA WHAT IS TAKING SO LONG, I WANT TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

well i think it has been a bit longer than just 5 months now with your story update so i am guessing that you wont be continuing with the story, which is a shame because it has been a great story and i hope you haven't given up on it because i would really like to read more!

Wow. Just wow. I was wondering how you would adress the Roxas and Nomine thing, but this one takes the figurative cake... and pie.

Now write chapter 18, PLEASE!

You freaking rock! If you don't finish this story, I'll hunt you down, whip you, tie you up, and play the game in front of you to give you ideas!

WTF?!.

it is so god

it is extremely well written

keep it up

i dont have any critism..

super good...

like i said u are a very good writer

it was...pretty intense

you dont even need to ask good or bad...

it is absolutely amazing...

i thought it was really well written

funny to

swimming time.

you are a really good writer