This story is amazing! I loved the first one too, so much EdxWin! X3 Keep writing, or I'll be sad face!

I like the sequel so far! Please don't stop? Fantastic writers like you are a rare jewel and I like spoiling myself by reading your stories!

One quick suggestion: I noticed in some of your past chapters/stories that with conversations, it would flow better if you grouped the characters words with actions. Example, Riza tells Roy off for something and Roy does something before answering. You'd break after Riza finished talking and group Roy's action-response with verbal-response. Sorry for the long, boring suggestion, feel free to ignore it ;

ARG! How long's it been since you updated? It's too good of a story to stop it now! I want Roy Riza fluff! And lots of it! *does puppy dog eyes at you* Please update? Pwease? Meep?

good stuff update soon!

this is good.please update.

wow, this storyis really addicting! everyone is a bitOOC, but that makes it all the better!

Update?

So the plot thickens...hehe now that's cliched. Please continue

FINALLY! AN UPDATE! (Not like I can complain -I don't do many chapter stories.)

Somehow, I was just like, "That's not Scar. Scar is a loner by default. He's always all broody and... gr..."

Anyway, I'm happy you updated. Gave me something to spice up my night. Thank you!

Update soon please!

well... that was interesting! is it a homunculus? or mebe Scar's brother?... oh right he... died... ah well good job!

Interesting. I like where you are taking this, focusing on Riza and Roy. I hope that you do update soon, I almost forgot about this story, and it's really good. I hope it lives up to expectations we recieved from your first story (Can't think of the name, but the one before this about Winry and Ed. Under the Roses?) Keep up the great work.

p.s.

Havoc is freakin awsome too

(I like Royai and Havocai)

An update! And I had prepared myself for the worst - this never being continued!

So, here we go on the little plot twist, then. Scar isn't Scar . . . hmm. Is it someone we know masquerading as him, or is it just someone trying to be him for the sake of a resistance?

Looking good! I hope your writers' block is gone - can't wait to see what's next _

Dude I really like where you are going with this! Get the band under control along with the school work and tada! you will have posted another chpater!

Soon would be good :)

great story luved hov you keep mentioning parts of under the roses and making roy a 'eat-your-sugar-coated-death-waffle' guy. not even ooc in the least. er, well... i like it.