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| e 2008-09-06 ch 23, anon. | abuselove the new tittle of the story it really fits! |
| Wierdlikepheobe 2008-08-22 ch 23,  | abuseI have really enjoyed reading this. It's a great premise. I love the idea of a school that combines the magical and non-magical disciplines. The only thing I would pick-up on is that the characterisation of harry and co seems a little older than it should be. Harry's very precise thinking about how to deal with Dumbledore after the chamber for instance, that seemed too logical for a 12/13 year old. But that is a small nigally thing to be honest when I have enjoyed this story so much. I do hope you are still on hiatus, and haven't abandoned this fic, as I am looking forward to following it to it's conclusion. Pheobe. X |
| Nathalia Potter 2008-08-16 ch 14, | abuse“Because everyone knows Peter Pettigrew was really attacked and kidnapped by three-toed Weaselbees to be their slave!” I'm not sure, but I think rats have four toes. Is this a reference to Wormtail's missing toe and his hiding with the weasleys? |
| Lorelei of the Sea 2008-08-16 ch 23, | abuseLove the story. I usually don't like the 'Harry-at-another-school' type of plot, because with all the OCs, it doesn't feel like Harry Potter, but all the canon characters make me like this a lot more. How is chapter 24 coming along? Is this story abandoned, or just on a really long hiatus? |
| Ravus7 2008-08-12 ch 23, | abuseI really like it and i can't waut until you update again! |
| SiriusBlackIsGod 2008-08-04 ch 23, | abuseI'm loving this fic and would like it updated soon please. I did read the AN at the end saying it might take a while but its been nearly a year and I was wondering if its being discontinued? |
| crazyme03 2008-08-01 ch 23, | abuseExcellent story. I like the relationship that you've developed between Harry and Blaise. What about Harry and Ron; will their relationship change? Thank you for sharing, and I hope that you continue. |
| aroy924 2008-07-27 ch 23, | abusegreat story so far! I hope you haven't abandonned it as I only stumbled on it recently and need more! thanks and please keep it up |
| Lientjuhh 2008-07-20 ch 23, | abuseIt was a differint story... I liked it... Well done.. ;) |
| deathstick 2008-07-19 ch 23, | abuseI really enjoyed this story! |
| HPGW_never 2008-07-18 ch 23, anon. | abusefinally, a fanfic author realizes that Harry's blood wasn't needed, only preferred. I do think that your punishment of Harry for the fight with Ron was excessive. He did not throw the first punch, and his actions were not especially provocotive. At most he should have gotten 1-2 detentions. |
| HPGW_never 2008-07-17 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm reading the story, and I like it so far, but I really don't see the twins attending Wyckham. The Weasley family are moderates, but they are still somewhat bigoted. Molly is a traditionalist and would insist on Hogwarts. Arthur has a fascination with muggles, but its also somewhat condescending. |
| Ulifan 2008-07-16 ch 5, | abusegreat story |
| KusajishiYachiru 2008-07-06 ch 23, | abuseIts really good, but you need to update |
| lexikins 2008-07-01 ch 4, | abusehi. I honestly love your story so far, but I have a few questionss. Like, do the Whyckham students wear uniforms, like the Hogwarts students? And are there any future pairings? b/c i refuse to read any Harry/Hermione fics ( no offense if u like this pairing)! keep up the good work!, lexikins |