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| Red Panda Bear 2006-07-09 ch 1,  | abuseVery sweet! I hope you do more of this pairing. :) |
| Wanda Wish 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseDamn I had a great review for this yesterday morning, but then I lost it when it said they were experiencng errors. So I'll review now, a little late. Yes. Yes yes yes. This is the story I've been waiting to be written. And to be writen by you? Better and better. You wrote this so well. You go me pitying them and almost being disgusted by them at the same time. They want to be together, and yet they don't want to be together. Both are in it for entirely the wrong reasons. It's hard to know what they do want. And you're right; how long can their mutual hate for each others children keep them together? I have to say I felt sorry for Mama Cosma; she just never gets a break. Maybe they deserve each other. Ach, too much to think about. And great idea for the reason Cosmo is mean to Wanda now. I had a similar thought, with her using her influence over him to change his behaviour towards Wanda. Great Oneshot and an instant fave. Or it would have been instant, at any rate. |
| Lonestarr 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseNot a bad extension of a rather pointless episode, and I liked the emotions displayed here. OTOH, am I the only one who saw the relationship as a total c--k-block...and in a kid's cartoon! |
| MisterBlue 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseAlthough I don't think *anyone* is a fan of Mama Cosma, but you have to feel for her here. It was like she knew that her relationship with Big Daddy was a sham, but she just kept plugging along as long as he'd let her. Unfortunately, it drove her self-esteem down lower, though she's still hopeful. It's really sad, though- being disappointed like that. I was hoping that he'd be a companion and part-time lover, keeping things on the "Down-Low", with no one being the wiser. But that's just me- I've listened to too many sleazy R&B tunes, so sue me. Until then, I guess they still have their families... or what's left of them... --Blue |