Ack! I loved it! So... Oh, I didn't like the book so much, but I loved the idea of any slash pairings. I love this. Maybe it's the dark, evil, and sexual aspect of it, but I love it. And I'm sad it didn't go further.

This was wonderful! I love Roger and Jack! Lol, I feel kinda sorry for Ralph though. But he had it comin lol

"No pig - I mean - pork, Ralph?"

That line cracked me up, seriously. I don't know why I found it so funny. Anyway... that was a good story - very interesting. Well done!

That was great! Fantastic job!

I loved this story. It was absolutly wonderful!! I'm a huge LOTF fanatic and two of my favorites are Jack and Roger. It was cute, in a sadistic kinda way. :D

Wow, that was really fantastic. I have you on my author alert list- I'll be waiting for more!

Wow. Intense. -__- Very sexy and dark... nice! =D

Definately should add more chapters! I love it

This is one of about two good Lord of the Flies slash fics on Nicely done.

mhmm, i liked this fic a lot. well written. good idea. very hot, though i admit i would've loved much more for you continue that little interlude. ::grin::

Wow, you know how to make someone read your story. Do twelve-year-old boys do that?

That was good! Gory:-p

wow. that was awesome! and incredibly well written...i was literally on the edge of my seat reading. excellent job!

wow... savage, savage, savage... insane! OO" what a scary story! but still, i liked it ^^

I LOVE THIS! Yes, that is Jack and Roger at their finest. And I don't like Ralph so XP to him. I would kill for more, except I don't think there's really any more you could add. But if there is, please please please do so!!