 SilveryMoonshadow 2007-08-21 . chapter 9Ooh, I love this fic! It's so funny! Love how the friendhip between Oliver and Johnny has improved over time. Adds to the flow of the story. However, on a lower note, there were some issues with grammer that made some parts hard to read...but despite that, great fic! I hope you update soon! |
 BurningAngel555 2007-06-14 . chapter 9(laughs out loud) this fic is hil-ar-ious! Hope you update soon! |
 Winterblazewolf 2007-02-19 . chapter 9Nice chapter.i like it!^^ |
 Schizo-of-Destiny 2007-02-06 . chapter 9Yay, Christmas! It's my favi holiday. :D
So Kai had an appearance in the story after all. :) And with Tala?! OMG!!
Last chappie for now already, aw...
I'll be waiting for your update, I really wanna know where this goes, especially with the whole Christmas thing! :D
Keep up the good work! |
 Schizo-of-Destiny 2007-02-06 . chapter 8Max?! Lol, I was actually expecting Kai. I read about the pairing of Kai and Oliver in a quizilla quiz once and it got me wondering. But Max will do too, he's so cute! He'd make a great brother. :D
I wonder what's gonna happen next! :reads next chappie right away: |
 Schizo-of-Destiny 2007-02-06 . chapter 7Yay, they're back together! Aw, they're so sweet, I even got tears in my eyes from that last part! :wipes tears away:
And there's no way I'll ever get over Beyblade or this pairing, it rocks my world too much! :D |
 Schizo-of-Destiny 2007-02-06 . chapter 6OMG Oliver and Johnny together? OMG! I think that's so awesome. I think this is the first fanfic in which I read about it, it's pretty cool. :D |
 Schizo-of-Destiny 2007-02-06 . chapter 5No one is reading it? Aw, that's a real shame. I know I'm reading it, and I'm enjoying it very much! :D
Will read the other chappies too now. :D |
 glitteredvixen06 2006-12-21 . chapter 9Lol, loved this chappie
plz update soon
P.S - by the way, cool vids on YouTube
I liked the Majestics singing 'No Fear' |
 Sugarmoe 2006-12-16 . chapter 9E! Very cute! I love the fact that Johnny and Max "are, like... SUPER good friends..." I could see that...
I also like how Kai and Tala are together... once again one of my most favourite Beyblade 'couples' (*giggles* 'in a relationship')
Anyway, awesome update and, as always, can't wait for the next!! |
 lallyzippo 2006-12-15 . chapter 9Needs a bit of a grammar/spelling check.
Other than that, it's pretty good. |
 hoshicat 2006-12-15 . chapter 9yay! great chappie! please update soon! im looking forwrd to it and also i dont think that the fic is too gay i think its absolutely hillarious! ~Hoshicat ^_^ |
 weightlessangel 2006-12-15 . chapter 9lol yes Cass this is totaly going to the shithouse, it's becoming more and more random. although i'll keep reading if u keep updating cuz i think this is like my humor release fic lol anyways yeah random but nicee =)
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 glitteredvixen06 2006-12-10 . chapter 1Go Maxie! I luv it! Poor Enrique and Johnny...lol...oliver and max as an item would be pretty cool and enrique and johnny together, anyway, I went off track. PLEASE UPDATE |
 Sugarmoe 2006-10-20 . chapter 8Ahh! I can't believe you introduced Max in this one!! And soo close to the Johnny thing too! Poor Ollie, his head must be spinning... Well, as always, can't wait until the next chapter! |