*cries* That was very good. I don't agree with 'them' either. ^^

Score! I like 'vitality waning'. :P

wow. That was good. Havoc’s smoking and the sense of smell & taste (or lack thereof?), that’s a great idea, and you wrote it really well. Your writing is fluid, the descriptions well-done.
Maybe i’m biaised ‘cause i just love this pairing, but there was something really sweet in their story, even though it ended so sadly. (i think i’m gonna cry, now…)