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iiceangel3.o
2008-04-20
ch 5,
abuseI hope you update soon! I really love this!
White Raven
2008-02-19
ch 5, anon.
abuseSweet mother of god you ARE alive after all...I was begining to wonder...

Aother wonderful chapter in the bag! Please keep your promoise to update more frequently!
Shiroi Moon
2007-12-30
ch 5,
abuseI'm amazed at how well this story is! I'm not really into fan fiction (even if I write it) but I have fallen for this story! Probily cause I love Silas and his history, but this one fiction that someone else but Dan Borwn wrote, I have truely become a fan of!
KaiLee
2007-09-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour story is
AWESOME
HEARTWARMMING
BREATHTAKING
ALLURING
FANTASTIC
ENCHANTING
PERFECT!
I love how you portray everything

just hope those words might encourage you to update...
Update soon :D
ImAfraidSo
2007-06-29
ch 2,
abuseI liked this alot better than the 1rst chapter. Things are realy picking up. Youve written this very well. You made alot of very important things happen in a short amount of time :)I have nothing intelligent or opinionated to say about the religion aspect or the plot aspect of the story because I never read the book nor am I reading this with any religouse intent I guess im just uninteresting like that haha. Im realy here for the relationship part, seeing more of Silas, and reading seeing him survive the gunshot. And you have done this for me my dear! I thank you :)
ImAfraidSo
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuseHi, yea I know im a little behind in seeing this movie and so just recently descovered the charecter Silas. I started reading a couple other Silas stories on here but was not able to finish them, congratulations! If you can keep my attention you can keep anyones! This was written realy well and the ONLY thing I could prossibly give advise on was the use of the word "mindset" several times over in the begining. Other than that is was pretty perfect and I will be getting to chapter 2 as soon as I can :)

Oh yea, props on making this your own charecter instead of using Sophie :)
shalow darkness
2007-06-25
ch 5,
abuseWhoo hoo! your story is awsome! I can't wait to see what happends to Silas, personaly I would like to here more about self inflicted pain. Don't shun me, please I have a problem with pain.
coco
2007-04-08
ch 5, anon.
abuseMore :D please!
Mina
2007-04-07
ch 5, anon.
abuseWOW, I am totally hooked now! I came upon your story in your profile (I'm reading Midnight tears, great story) and its absolutely amazing!! I honestly hope you update soon, I'm not sure I can wait...I like how you portray both characters, Silas seems so mysterious and dangerous..yet sexy, haha! Damaris is great too, sounds like you can totally relate to her! whew anyway hope to see a new chapter soon, ur a wonderful writer!
Amika Suajii
2007-03-17
ch 5,
abuseI don't normally review fanfics, but I must say that this is -amazing-. I can't wait for the update! ^_^
NajaMoonshadow
2007-02-15
ch 5,
abusethree words (very appropriate words actually ) Oh. My. God. three more--This. Is. Fantastic! double exclamation points. I am simply breathless for more (pretends to swoon) ok, enough dramatics. I love this! Your characters are three demensional, they are belivable but more than that, they are people you can connect to. Your plot is well defined and coherant and is intriguingly mysterious. I simply can't wait for more! Naja
megan
2007-02-04
ch 5, anon.
abuseWow! This is by far the best story about Silas I have ever read...Please update cause I can't wait to see what happens next.
Kris
2007-01-22
ch 5, anon.
abuseNew to your story and one word: update!! Well written and interesting.
Liennz
2007-01-22
ch 5, anon.
abuseWithout doubt the best Silas fic I've read!! Thank you so much for this! And please, please continue.
Silas is the most beautiful and saddest character I know...
Tigerstripes17
2007-01-15
ch 5,
abuseWoah! who's this new guy? He's a little freaky isn't he? Yeah, but I guess that just makes the story even more exciting huh? Great Chapter, there's some more between Silas and Damaris, yea! Update Soon!
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